CHAPTER I
INTRODUCTION
Background
Teaching how to write effectively is one of the most important
life-long skills educators impart to their students. When teaching writing,
educators must be sure to select resources and support materials that not only
aid them in teaching how to write, but that will also be the most effective in
helping their students learn to write. Students need
to be personally involved in writing exercises in order to make the learning
experience of lasting value. Encouraging student participation in the exercise,
while at the same time refining and expanding writing skills, requires a
certain pragmatic approach. The teacher should be clear on what skills he/she is
trying to develop. Next, the teacher needs to decide on which means (or type of
exercise) can facilitate learning of the target area. Once the target skill
areas and means of implementation are defined, the teacher can then proceed to
focus on what topic can be employed to ensure student participation. By
pragmatically combing these objectives, the teacher can expect both enthusiasm
and effective learning.
Problem
Formulation
1.
What is definition of writing ?
2.
How
to Designing Assessment Tasks?
3.
How
to do test of written English?
4.
How
to Scoring Methods for Responsive and Extensive Writing?
Purposes
1.
To
know definition of formulation
2.
To
know how to design assessment task
3.
To
know how to do test written English
4.
To
know how to scoring method for responsive and extensive writing
CHAPTER II
DISCUSSION
Definition
of writing
Writing is the process of using symbols to communicate thoughts and
ideas in a readable form. Writing can also refer to the work or career of an
author.
Genres
of Written Language:
Academic
Writing
Papers
and general subject reports
Essays,
compositions
Academically
focused journals
Short
answer test responses
Technical
reports (e.g./ lab reports)
Theses,
dissertations
Job-related
Writing
Messages
(e.g., phone messages)
Letters/emails
Memos
(e.g., I nteroffice)
Reports
(e.g., job evaluations, project reports)
Schedules,
labels, signs
Advertisements,
announcements
Manuals
Personal
writing
Letters,
emails, greeting cards, invitations
Messages,
notes
Calendar,
entries, shopping lists, reminders
Financial
documents (e.g., tax forms, checks, loan applications)
Forms
questionnaires, medical reports, immigration documents
Diaries,
personal journals
Fiction
(e.g., short stories, poetry)
Types
of writing performance:
Imitative
To produce written language, the learner must attain skills in the
fundamental, basic tasks of writing letters, words, punctuations and very brief
sentences. This category includes ability to spell correctly and to perceive
phoneme-grapheme correspondences in the English spelling system. It is a level
at which learners are trying to master the mechanics of writing. At this stage,
form is primary if not exclusive focus, while context and meaning are of
secondary concern.
Intensive
(Controlled)
Beyond the fundamentals of imitative writing are skills in producing
appropriate vocabulary writing a context, collocations and idioms and correct
grammatical features up to the length of a sentence. Meaning and context are of
some importance in determining correctness and appropriateness but in assessment
tasks are more concern with a focus on form, and are rather strictly controlled
by the test design.
Responsive
Here, assessment tasks require learners to perform at a limited
discourse level, connecting sentences into a paragraph and creating a logically
connected sequence of two or three paragraphs. Tasks respond to pedagogical
directives, lists of criteria, outlines and other guidelines. Genres of writing
include brief narrative and descriptions, shorts reports, lab reports,
summaries, brief responses to reading and interpretations of charts or graphs.
Under specified conditions, the writer begins to exercise some freedom of
choice among alternative forms of expression of ideas. The writer has mastered
the fundamentals of sentences-level grammar and is more focused on the
discourse conventions that will achieve the objectives of the written text. Form focused attention is mostly at the
discourse level, with a strong emphasis on context and meaning.
Extensive
Extensive writing implies successful management of all the
processes and strategies of writing for all purposes, up to the length of an
essay, a term paper, a major research project report, or even a thesis. Writers
focus on achieving a purpose, organizing and developing ideas logically, using
details to support or illustrate ideas, demonstrating syntactic and lexical
variety, and in many cases, engaging in the process of multiple drafts to
achieve a final product. Focus on grammatical form is limited to occasional
editing, or proofreading of a draft.
Micro
and Macro Skills of Writing
Micro-skills
Micro-skills apply more appropriately to imitative and intensive types
of writing task.
1.
Produce
graphemes and orthographic patterns of English.
2.
Produce
writing at an efficient rate of speed to suit the purpose.
3.
Produce
an acceptable core of words and use appropriate word order patterns.
4.
Use
acceptable grammatical system (e.g., tenses, agreement, pluralization, patterns
and rules).
5.
Express
a particular meaning in different grammatical forms.
6.
Use
cohesive device in written discourse.
Macro-skills
Macro-skills are essential for the successful mastery of responsive
and extensive writing.
1.
Use
the rhetorical forms and conventions of written discourse.
2.
Appropriately
accomplish the communicative functions of written text according to form and
purpose.
3.
Convey
links and connections between events and communicate such relations as main
idea, supporting idea, new information, given information, generalization, and
exemplification.
4.
Distinguish
between literal and implied meanings when writing.
5.
Correctly
convey culturally specific references in the context of the written text.
6.
Develop
and use a battery of writing strategies, such as accurately accessing the
audience’s interpretation, using prewriting devices, writing with fluency in
the first draft, using paraphrases and synonyms and soliciting peer and
instructor feedback, and using feedback for revising and editing.
Designing Assessment Task
Imitative
Writing
Imitative writing is used for the beginning level English learner
which needs basic training in and assessment of imitative writing: the
rudiments of forming letters, words, and simple sentences. We examine this
level of writing first.
Task
in (Hand) writing letters, words, and punctuation
Copying
The example :
Listening
cloze selection task
The example :
Picture-cued
task; familiar pictures are displayed and test takers are told write the word
that the picture represent.
Form
completion task; a variation on pictures is the use of simple for registration,
application, etc. that asks for name, address, phone number, and other data.
Converting
numbers and abbreviations to words; some test have a section on which numbers
are written for example hours of the day, dates, or schedules and test takers
are directed to write out the numbers.
Test takers see; 9:00_____________
5:45________________ Tues ____________
5/3________________ 726 S Main St________________________
Example;
Spelling
task and detecting phoneme-grapheme correspondences
Spelling
test: in a traditional, old fashioned spelling test, the teacher tats a simple
list of words, one word at a time, followed by the word.
Picture
cued-task; picture are displayed with the objective of focusing on familiar
words whose spelling unpredictable.
Multiple
choices techniques; presenting words and phrase in the form of a multiple
choice task risks crossing over into the domain of assessing reading.
The example :
Matching
phonetics symbols; if students have become familiar with the phonetic alphabet,
they could be shown phonetic symbol and asked to write correctly spelled word
alphabetically.
The Example:
Intensive
(Controlled) Writing
This
next level of writing is what second language teacher training manuals have for
decades called controlled writing. It may also be thought of as form focused
writing, grammar writing, or simply guided writing. A good deal of writing at
this level is display writing as opposed to real writing: students produce
language to display their competence in grammar, vocabulary, or sentence
formation, and not necessarily to convey meaning for an authentic purpose. The
traditional grammar/vocabulary test has plenty of display writing in it, since
the response mode demonstrates only the test-taker’s ability to combine or use
words correctly. No new information is passed on form one person to the other.
Dictation
and Diction-Comp; paragraph is read at
normal speed, usually two or three times, then the teacher asks students to
rewrite the paragraph from the best of their recollection.
Example : Test taker hear / read at normal speed, usually two or there
times
Petroleum products, such as gasoline, kerosene, home heating
oil, residual fuel oil, and lubricating oils, come from ones source. Crude oil
found below the earth surface, as well as under large bodies of water, from a
few hundred feet below the surface to as deep as 25.000 feet into the earth
interior. Crude oil is obtained by drilling a hole through the earth, but
sometimes more dry holes are drilled than those producing oil. Pressure at the
source, or pumping, forces the crude oil to the surface. Crude oil wells flow
at varying rates, from the to thousands of barrels per hour. Petroleum products
vary greatly in physical appearance: thin, thick, transparent, or opaque. Their
chemical compositions are made up of only two elements: carbon and hydrogen,
which form compounds called hydrocarbons. Other chemical elements found in the
union with the hydrocarbons are few and are classified as impurities. Trace
elements are also found, but these are of such minute quantities that they are
disregarded. The various petroleum products are refined from the crude oil by
heating and condensing the vapors of crude oil. These products are called light
oils such as gasoline, kerosene, and distillate oil.
The test taker rewrite the paragraph from the best of their
recollection.
Grammatical
transformation tasks; the task are virtually devoid of any meaningful value.
Sometimes test designer attempt to add authenticity by providing a context.
Example : Test takers read or hear:
o Change the tenses in a paragraph into past tense
She does not follow the examination with her friend
James reads a adventure book with his close friend
o Change statements to yes or no or wh-question
She was happy because she gets a present from her boyfriend
My friend writes a letter to her teacher
o Change questions into statements
Are you studying today?
Are James get low score in this semester?
o Change direct speech to indirect speech
Ann said,” I am hungry”
Ryan said,” I was happy yesterday”
o Change active to passive voice
The teacher corrects our homework
Picture
cued tasks : in detaching the almost
ubiquitous reading and writing connection and offering instead a nonverbal
means to stimulate written responses.
Short
sentences; a drawing of some simple action is shown
Picture
description; a somewhat more complex picture may be presented showing, say, a
person reading on a couch, a cat under a table, books, and pencils on the
table.
Picture sequence description; a sequences of three to six pictures
depicting a story line can provide a suitable stimulus for written production.
Vocabulary
assessment tasks; the major technique vocabulary are defining, using a word a
sentences.
Ordering
tasks; while this somewhat inauthentic task generates writing performance and
may be said to tap into grammatical word-ordering rules, it presents a
challenge to test takers whose learning styles do not dispose them to logical
mathematically problem solving.
Short
answer and Sentence completion tasks; participation of reading performance in
there compilation
Responsive
and Extensive
In
this section we consider both responsive and extensive writing tasks. They will
be regarded here as a continuum of possibilities ranging from lower-end tasks
whose complexity exceeds those in the previous category of intensive or
controlled writing, through more open-ended tasks such as writing short
reports, essays, summaries, and responses, up to texts of several pages or
more.
Paraphrasing
Example : Test takes read:
Read the article below, then rewrite with your own words. Avoid plagiarizing.
Education, Primary
Education, Primary, first years of formal education. In most countries the
emphasis in the early years is on the core skills of reading, writing, and
simple arithmetic. In the United Kingdom, the National Curriculum begins at the
age of five, and primary schools are required to cover English, mathematics,
history, geography, science, technology, physical education, music, and art.
Some religious instruction is also provided, and some schools begin to teach a
foreign language. In most countries, elementary education is free and is
usually compulsory. In some, for example, India, children may learn three or
four languages.
Guided
question and answer
Guided writing stimuli
1. Where
did this story take place? (Setting)
2. Who were the people in the story? (Character)
3. What happened first? And then? (Sequence of event)
4. Why did ___________ do _____________ ? (Reason, causes)
5. What did __________________ think about ______________ ? (Opinion)
6. What happened at the end? (Climax)
7. What is the moral of this story? (Evaluation)?
Paragraph
construction tasks
Topic
sentence writing
Topic
development within a paragraph
Development
of main and supporting ideas across paragraphs
Strategic
options
Attending to task
Attending to genre
Reports
Summaries of Reading/lectures/videos
Responses of Reading
Narration,Description,persuasion/Argument and exposition
Interpreting Statistical,Graphic or Tabular Data
Library Research Paper
Issues in Assesing Responsive And extensive Writing
Authenticity:
It is a trait that is given special attention. You need to check the validity
of the production presented by a test-taker and it needs to be authentic in
order to bring out the best in the writer. In this case the teacher becomes
less of an instructor and more of a coach or facilitator.
Scoring:
These two last stages (responsive and extensive) are the hardest to be
assessed. You must assess not only the form (the way the writer put words
together), but also the function of the text (what the writer is trying to
say).
Time:
It is the only skill in which the writer is not constrained by time. The writer
is free to write as many drafts as he wants before it becomes a final product.
Test
of Written English (TWE)
One
of a number of internationally available standardized tests of writing ability
is the Test of Written English (TWE). Established in 1986, the TWE has gained a
reputation as a well-respected measure of written English, and a number of
research articles support its validity (Frase et al., 1999; Hale et al., 1996;Myford
et al., 1996). In 1998, a computer-delivered version of the TWE was
incorporated into the standard computer-based TOEFL and simply labeled as the
“writing” section of the TOEFL. The TWE is still offered as a separate test
especially where only the paper based TOEFL is available. Correlations between
the TWE and TOEFL scores (before TWE became a standard part of TOEFL) were
consistently high, ranging from 57 to 69 over 10 test administrations from 1993
to 1995.
The
TWE is in the category of a timed impromptu test-takers are under a 30 minute
time limit and are not able to prepare ahead of time for the topic that will
appear. Topics are prepared by a panel of experts following specifications for
topics that represent commonly used discourse and thought patterns at the
university level.
Test
preparation manuals such as Deborah Phillips’s Longman Introductory Course for
the TOEFL test (2001) advice TWE test takers to follow six steps to maximize
success on the test:
Carefully
identify the topic.
Plan
your supporting ideas.
In
the introductory paragraph, restate the topic and state the organizational plan
of the essay.
Write
effective supporting paragraphs (show transitions, include a topic sentence,
specify details).
Restate
your position and summarize in the concluding paragraph.
Edit
sentence structure and rhetorical expression,
The
scoring guide for the TWE follows a widely accepted set of specifications for a
holistic evaluation of an essay. Each point on the scoring system is defined by
a set of statements that address topic, organization and development,
supporting ideas, facility (fluency, naturalness, appropriateness) in writing,
and grammatical and lexical correctness and choice.
Scoring
Methods For Responsive and Extensive Writing
Holistic
Scoring
The
TWE scoring scale is a prime example of holistic scoring. Each point on a
holistic scale is given a systematic set of descriptors, and the
reader-evaluator matches on overall impression with the descriptors.
Holistic
scoring is a method by which trained readers evaluate a piece of writing for
its overall quality. The holistic scoring used in Florida requires readers to
evaluate the work as a whole, while considering four elements: focus,
organization, support, and conventions. This method is sometimes called focused
holistic scoring. In this type of scoring, readers are trained not to become
overly concerned with any one aspect of writing but to look at a response as a
whole.
Focus
Focus
refers to how clearly the paper presents and maintains a main idea, theme, or
unifying point. Papers representing the higher end of the point scale
demonstrate a consistent awareness of the topic and do not contain extraneous
information.
Organization
Organization
refers to the structure or plan of development (beginning, middle, and end) and
whether the points logically relate to one another. Organization refers to (1)
the use of transitional devices to signal the relationship of the supporting
ideas to the main idea, theme, or unifying point and (2) the evidence of a
connection between sentences. Papers representing the higher end of the point
scale use transitions to signal the plan or text structure and end with summary
or concluding statements.
Support
Support
refers to the quality of the details used to explain, clarify, or define. The
quality of support depends on word choice, specificity, depth, credibility, and
thoroughness. Papers representing the higher end of the point scale provide
fully developed examples and illustrations in which the relationship between
the supporting ideas and the topic is clear.
Conventions
Conventions
refer to punctuation, capitalization, spelling, and variation in sentence used
in the paper. These conventions are basic writing skills included in Florida's
Minimum Student Performance Standards and the Uniform Student Performance
Standards for Language Arts. Papers representing the higher end of the scale
follow, with few exceptions, the conventions of punctuation, capitalization,
and spelling and use a variety of sentence structures to present ideas.
Development
Developments
are all major ideas are set off by paragraphs which have clearly stated or
implied topics; the main idea and all major topics are supported by concrete,
specific evidence.
Style
Style
is sentences relate to each other and to the paragraph topic and are
subordinate to the topic; word and phrase choice is felicitous; tone is
consistent and appropriate.
Correctness
Correctness
there are no major mechanical errors (e.g., agreement) and only a few minor
errors (e.g., spelling).
References
References
are source material is incorporated logically, insightfully and elegantly;
sources are documented accurately, elegantly and emphatically.
Advantages
of holistic scoring include:
Fast
evaluation
Relatively
high inter-rater reliability
The
fact that scores represent “standards” that are easily interpreted by lay
persons
The
facts that scores tend to emphasize the writer’s strengths
Applicability
to writing across many different disciplines
Disadvantageof
holistic scoring:
One
scores masks differences across the subskills within each score
No
diagnostic information is available (no washback potential)
The
scale may not apply equally well to all genres of writing
Raters
need to be extensively trained to use the scale accurately
Primary
trait scoring
A second
method of scoring, primary trait, focuses on “how well students can write
within a narrowly defined range of discourse”. This type of scoring emphasizes
the task at hand and assigns a score based on the effectiveness of the text’s
achieving that one goal. In summary, a primary trait score would assess:
The
accuracy of the account of the original (summary)
The
clarity of the steps of the procedure and the final result (lab report)
The
description of the main features of the graph (graph description), and
The
expression of the writer’s opinion (response to an article)
Analytic
Scoring
For
classroom instruction, holistic scoring provideslittle washback into the writer’s
further stage of learning. Primary trait scoring focuses on the principal
function of the text and therefore offers some feedback potential, but no
washback for any of the aspects of the written production that enhance the
ultimate accomplishment of the purpose. Classroom evaluation of learning is
best served through analytic scoring, in which as many as six major elements of
writing are scored, thus enabling learners to home in on weakness and
capitalized on strengths.
Analytic
scoring may be more appropriately called analytic assessment in order to
capture its closer association with classroom language instruction than with
formal testing. Brown and Bailey (1984) designed an analytical scoring scale
that specified five major categories and a description of five different levels
in each category, ranging from “unacceptable” to “excellent”.Here are the five
categories:
Organizations
(Introduction, body and conclusion)
Logical
Development of Ideas (Content)
Grammar
Punctuation,
Spelling and Mechanics
Style
and Quality of Expression
Assessing
Initial Stages of the Process of Composing
Focus
your efforts primarily on meaning, main idea, and organization.
Comment
on the introductory paragraph.
Make
general comments about the clarity of the main idea and logic or
appropriateness of the organization.
As a
rule of thumb, ignore minor (local) grammatical and lexical errors.
Indicate
what appear to be major (global) errors.
Do
not rewrite questionable, ungrammatical, or awkward sentences; rather. Probe
with a question about meaning.
Comment
on features that appear to be irrelevant to the topic.
CHAPTER
III
SUMMARY
Advanced
writing skills are an important aspect of academic performance as well as
subsequent work-related performance. However, American students rarely attain
advanced scores on assessments of writing skills. In order to achieve higher
levels of writing performance, the working memory demands of writing processes
should be reduced so that executive attention is free to coordinate interactions
among them. This can in theory be achieved through deliberate practice that
trains writers to develop executive control through repeated opportunities to
write and through timely and relevant feedback. Automated essay scoring
software may offer a way to alleviate the intensive grading demands placed on
instructors and, thereby, substantially increase the amount of writing practice
that students receive.
REFERENCES
Brown Douglas.2003.Languange
assessment Principles and Classroom Practices.California:Pearson Longman.
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